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Delix Club: Chapter 1 "The Magical Sign of Delix"

Since the Winx defeated the dark energy for good, everybody were just fine, but suddenly 2 Witches at Cloud Tower summon a Fairy that was defeated because she wants to get all the magic on the hole Universe; so when the Fairy called Darkia re-born, she transformed the 2 witches into shadows and now she wants all the magic for her.
So now the Winx can't  Defeat Darkia because of her Powers; so when they are defeated by Darkia, a group of young fairies go to Earth to earn a new power called Lynix, and for this they must need help of some other fairies but at least I know that my fairies will defeat the evil Darkia.

Griselda - Mistress Faragonda, something is happening outside Alfea
Faragonda - Well, Prepare all the fairies and let's go there!
Griselda - OK Mistress, LET'S GO FAIRIES

(Outside Alfea)

Winx - Magic Winx Sirenix! (Transitions)

Darkia - Ohh look at those fairies there!, they think they can beat me! The MOST POWERFUL FAIRY EVER!

Bloom - Well I know we can defeat you, let's go Winx
Stella - I think you need some Sunshine! (Attacking a shadow Witch)
Musa - The music power will defeat you (Attacking Darkia)

(Darkia Attacks)

Tecna - Tecno-screen!

Darkia- Shadow Witches come to join me! Dark Shadows, come to defeat the good energy! Shadow Convergence!

Winx - AHH is too strong! NO!....

Everybody at Alfea was scary! THE WINX WERE DEFEATED!  

Darkia - Well I think you had enough this time, let's go shadows!
(Darkia Disappeared)

Faragonda - Winx Are you OK? WINX? WINX!

(The Next Day)

Faragonda - Yesterday the Winx were defeated by this horrible creature, but now we must defeat Darkia to restore the peace on the Universe...
Student 1 - but how?
Student 2 - Yeah what can we do?
Faragonda - We must search for a new Power to defeat Darkia but the Winx are hurt so...

Altair - We can go!
Aude - Yeah We want to defeat that Fairy!
Faragonda - Is just to dangerous for students fairies, tomorrow I will call to a friend to restore the Company of Light.
Fabia - but we are ready! We have everything to defeat her!
Faragonda - I have took my decision!

(At night)

Claudine - I want to defeat that Monster
Aria - but what can we do?, Mistress Faragonda told us...
Aude - It doesn't matter we must earn a new Power to defeat her
Altair - And I know what kind of power!
Perla - REALLY? which is?
Altair - is an ancient power from Earth, my home planet, but To earn it we must take a travel to the past.
Perla - No way!
Aude - So, we must go?
Fabia - Yeah, but how can we go back to the past?
Claudine - Gladys!
Aria - Gladys?
Claudine - Yeah, Gladys is a fairy of time, maybe she can helps us
Altair - well let's go Delix!

(Koc Knoc)

Gladys - Hi Girls, What can I do?
Fabia - can you help us?
Gladys - yeah what can I do?
Aude - Well can you travel to the past?
Gladys - Yeah!
Altair - well so come with us!

(On Earth)

Altair - We must go to an Island near a River, there we must go back in time
Gladys - Ok, but once We travel I must go!, I can't stay here, sorry.
Aude - Well, at least me can go back, then we must find a way to come back!

Gladys - take my hand, and now HERE WE GO...

PREVIEW of the Next Chapter:
The Delix go back in time to find Merlin so when they are about to find him, a Horrible thing happen, a dark spell on Aria's Necklace, so can they broke the spell and find Merlin?
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:iconfloraharmonix:
floraharmonix Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Artist
You are killed the winx?  XD
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:icondragonshinyflame:
DragonShinyFlame Featured By Owner 10 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I didn't killed them just they can't defeat the villain
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:iconfloraharmonix:
floraharmonix Featured By Owner 3 hours ago  Hobbyist Artist
and whats up with aria?i she is defeated by darkia but not dead,why do she quit for season 2?
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:iconbloomydragonflame:
bloomydragonflame Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  New member Hobbyist
Amazing
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:iconmlpeglover:
mlpeglover Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
awsome do you do all this
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:icondragonshinyflame:
DragonShinyFlame Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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:iconmlpeglover:
mlpeglover Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
awsome 
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:iconkillergirlfuria:
KillerGirlFuria Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
All right, I'll just be honest. You may hate, you may argue. I'ts my opinion, my critique.

That's how you're wroting a dialogues is a worst type of mistake ever. Dialogues can NOT be wroten like that, never. There's nothing about places, emotions and look either. Just nothing. Empty dialogues. Where the heck are descriptions I ask?  Something like "(On Earth)" gives us nothing. It's like the script of a play, not a story. Nope, I'm not buying it.

Thank you, have a nice day.
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:icondragonshinyflame:
DragonShinyFlame Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well it is the first "Story" so the new season it will be a "formal book" 
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:iconkillergirlfuria:
KillerGirlFuria Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I don't understand what you mean. I'm speaking here about writing style, not which book or story is it.  Just my opinion as a writer and a critic.
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