Delix Club: Chapter 1 "The Magical Sign of Delix"
Since the Winx defeated the dark energy for good, everybody were just fine, but suddenly 2 Witches at Cloud Tower summon a Fairy that was defeated because she wants to get all the magic on the hole Universe; so when the Fairy called Darkia re-born, she transformed the 2 witches into shadows and now she wants all the magic for her.
So now the Winx can't Defeat Darkia because of her Powers; so when they are defeated by Darkia, a group of young fairies go to Earth to earn a new power called Lynix, and for this they must need help of some other fairies but at least I know that my fairies will defeat the evil Darkia.
Griselda - Mistress Faragonda, something is happening outside Alfea
Faragonda - Well, Prepare all the fairies and let's go there!
Griselda - OK Mistress, LET'S GO FAIRIES
Winx - Magic Winx Sirenix! (Transitions)
Darkia - Ohh look at those fairies there!, they think they can beat me! The MOST POWERFUL FAIRY EVER!
Bloom - Well I know we can defeat you, let's go Winx
Stella - I think you need some Sunshine! (Attacking a shadow Witch)
Musa - The music power will defeat you (Attacking Darkia)
Tecna - Tecno-screen!
Darkia- Shadow Witches come to join me! Dark Shadows, come to defeat the good energy! Shadow Convergence!
Winx - AHH is too strong! NO!....
Everybody at Alfea was scary! THE WINX WERE DEFEATED!
Darkia - Well I think you had enough this time, let's go shadows!
Faragonda - Winx Are you OK? WINX? WINX!
(The Next Day)
Faragonda - Yesterday the Winx were defeated by this horrible creature, but now we must defeat Darkia to restore the peace on the Universe...
Student 1 - but how?
Student 2 - Yeah what can we do?
Faragonda - We must search for a new Power to defeat Darkia but the Winx are hurt so...
Altair - We can go!
Aude - Yeah We want to defeat that Fairy!
Faragonda - Is just to dangerous for students fairies, tomorrow I will call to a friend to restore the Company of Light.
Fabia - but we are ready! We have everything to defeat her!
Faragonda - I have took my decision!
Claudine - I want to defeat that Monster
Aria - but what can we do?, Mistress Faragonda told us...
Aude - It doesn't matter we must earn a new Power to defeat her
Altair - And I know what kind of power!
Perla - REALLY? which is?
Altair - is an ancient power from Earth, my home planet, but To earn it we must take a travel to the past.
Perla - No way!
Aude - So, we must go?
Fabia - Yeah, but how can we go back to the past?
Claudine - Gladys!
Aria - Gladys?
Claudine - Yeah, Gladys is a fairy of time, maybe she can helps us
Altair - well let's go Delix!
Gladys - Hi Girls, What can I do?
Fabia - can you help us?
Gladys - yeah what can I do?
Aude - Well can you travel to the past?
Gladys - Yeah!
Altair - well so come with us!
Altair - We must go to an Island near a River, there we must go back in time
Gladys - Ok, but once We travel I must go!, I can't stay here, sorry.
Aude - Well, at least me can go back, then we must find a way to come back!
Gladys - take my hand, and now HERE WE GO...
PREVIEW of the Next Chapter:
The Delix go back in time to find Merlin so when they are about to find him, a Horrible thing happen, a dark spell on Aria's Necklace, so can they broke the spell and find Merlin?
You are killed the winx? XD
I didn't killed them just they can't defeat the villain
awsome do you do all this
All right, I'll just be honest. You may hate, you may argue. I'ts my opinion, my critique.
That's how you're wroting a dialogues is a worst type of mistake ever. Dialogues can NOT be wroten like that, never. There's nothing about places, emotions and look either. Just nothing. Empty dialogues. Where the heck are descriptions I ask? Something like "(On Earth)" gives us nothing. It's like the script of a play, not a story. Nope, I'm not buying it.
Thank you, have a nice day.
well it is the first "Story" so the new season it will be a "formal book"
I don't understand what you mean. I'm speaking here about writing style, not which book or story is it. Just my opinion as a writer and a critic.
well I don't know anything about you and your writings so I can't debate with you.
I'm writing a story in english now, so when I'll finish I may link it for you, if you want.
Also, if you want informations about me: I'm fifteen-year-old girl from Poland.
I say that you can't criticize right now because you don't have experience...
well, she (or he) may not speak English, so she may have some errors in this. But this might not be officially the Delix Club script, so she may fix it.
OK so DELIX is the new club and all those stuff but why new girls think that they can beat darkia . but i liked it when your gonna do the videos i really wanna see something else not just the winx defeating all the villains and monsters here you just have a fan and that wasn't any offense actually it's just my opinion and keep doing great jobs your imagination is the best... XD
thanks.. i think haha xD and well right now caboulla and I are writing the chapters of the club.
Sirenix is a water power, the Winx has to find a power that has light or something, I think? Listen, I do not mean any offence, okay!
I think it's because the Sirenix is powerful for underwater enemies right?
Not even the powers of Sirenix can defeat this new Evil?
The Magic Dimension could be in real danger, then.
The Magic Dimension could be in real danger, then.
yes! actually Sirenix is a powerful transformation but Darkia has more dark powers that defeat sirenix
WOW! esta increible!